I like the natural style of your magazine and the colour scheme used, and I think the main layout of the front cover works well. I like the different choices of fonts and the relaxed look of the model, although I think some of the text gets lost at the top and could be positioned slightly different and resized. I like the style of the contents page but I think the model should vary her pose. The double page spread looks good, but once again I would consider how the model looks in terms of facial expression. I like how the title overlaps onto both pages, though, and overall, I really like this as a whole. :)
I really like the overall style of your magazine. I think the model really suits the genre of your magazine. I like the use of a record on the top of your contents page, it reminds me of the use of the pause, play and stop buttons in The Fly Magazine. I like the use of black on white for the double page, this makes it a lot easier for the reader to read the article. I think that the contents page looks a bit too busy, but I like the use of the blue on white. I think you should maybe get some different poses for the model for each page, maybe on one she could have a guitar? :)
I like the natural style of your magazine and the colour scheme used, and I think the main layout of the front cover works well. I like the different choices of fonts and the relaxed look of the model, although I think some of the text gets lost at the top and could be positioned slightly different and resized. I like the style of the contents page but I think the model should vary her pose. The double page spread looks good, but once again I would consider how the model looks in terms of facial expression. I like how the title overlaps onto both pages, though, and overall, I really like this as a whole. :)
ReplyDeleteI really like the overall style of your magazine. I think the model really suits the genre of your magazine. I like the use of a record on the top of your contents page, it reminds me of the use of the pause, play and stop buttons in The Fly Magazine. I like the use of black on white for the double page, this makes it a lot easier for the reader to read the article. I think that the contents page looks a bit too busy, but I like the use of the blue on white. I think you should maybe get some different poses for the model for each page, maybe on one she could have a guitar? :)
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